You have decided to leave your current job and look for a new one. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
• explain why you want to leave your current job
• what kind of job you are looking for
• ask for some help or advice
Dear Sudhir,
I trust you're having a good day.
I would like to let you know that I have decided to change my current job due to several reasons, which I will be explaining further in this letter.
One of the main reason behind the job change is that sometimes, I feel a bit stressed with the current office environment, because of the many other personal problems among my team members. One of my colleague, who is always ready to fight with other teammates, had asked me so many things about my family, which are not acceptable.
But, I'm looking forward to joining a multinational company where the office environment should be great. Moreover, as you know, I am working on financial projects for a long period of time and I always wanted to work on sales projects, so this time I have decided to find a new role in the sales department.
Furthermore, I'd like to ask you for some help in finding a relevant job in the sales department. If you have any advice for me, I'd be more than happy to listen to your suggestions. Being a good friend, I'm expecting some effective support from your end, so that I would be able to find jobs as soon as possible.
I can't wait to hear from you.
Best wishes,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...orking on financial projects for a long period of time and I always wanted to work on sales pr...
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...n the sales department. Furthermore, Id like to ask you for some help in findin...
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...artment. If you have any advice for me, Id be more than happy to listen to your su...
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... to find jobs as soon as possible. I cant wait to hear from you. Best wishes, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4932735426 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56336771237 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618834080717 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2471224416 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0909090909 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356694514722 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117991191941 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821907207489 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158225193756 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836335626451 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.