The use of cell phones (mobile phones) has grown rapidly in the past few years. People use them for both business and personal reasons.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of the widespread use of cell phones (mobile phones)?
Mobile phones have become increasingly popular among people since the last few years, and these are widely used by many people for their official and private purposes. However, while I believe that cell phones have played an important role in communication and development, I also think that it has some drawbacks among students and children. In this essay, I will discuss a few positive points and negative points related to mobile phones.
To begin with, advantages, communicating with people from other countries have become very convenient and easy by the invention of mobile phones. Even mobile phones are widely used to communicate with close relatives to maintain a good relationship with them. Students, who are studying abroad, for instance, are now able to communicate with their parents easily. In the development of this advanced era, cell phones have played a vital role to speed-up the modernization. Since a few years, it has been observed that people are able to communicate with others easily using their cell phones whereas, before the invention of mobile phones, people used to make calls using the landline phone. Engineers, for example, can talk to top leaders over the phone to take approval for any development project.
Despite the many advantages of cell phones, it has some disadvantages of mobile phones among students and children. Mobile phones are widely used by school and university students who belong to wealthy families, and they waste lots of their studying time on using mobile phones. Many school students, for instance, use mobile phones when they are supposed to complete their assignments. Cell phones are also used by children also in playing video games which has some detrimental effect on them. For example, the screen of mobile phones emits infrared rays which are very harmful to children.
To sum up, every coin has two sides. Similarly, mobile phones have many advantages such as easy communication between people. On the other hand, it has some drawbacks including waste of unnecessary time by students by using mobile phones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, similarly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20833333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6389866016 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0837358832 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.941176471 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7647058824 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481355162856 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174789635386 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109957159646 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318062705662 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089123903602 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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