Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advertising products have become increasingly popular among people, specifically in the area of advanced technologies, such as touch system, voice command, and machine learning. But, the vast majority of people like to buy unnecessary products, which they do not need, by watching advertisements. I personally believe that adverts are really helpful for the marketing of newly invented products, which are useful in our day-to-day lives.
To begin with, the newly invented products, which are generally involved in improving our daily lives, are widely advertised on social media and television. These ads could be helpful for people because it is helping them to enhance their lifestyle or daily routine. In addition to that, newly developed products could benefit people in many efficient ways. The voice command device, for instance, is widely advertised on social media and television channels, and it is really helping people to do their day-to-day tasks, such as switch-off lights, send messages, and making calls. Thus, it is helping people in many ways to enhance their lifestyle.
The advertisement of common products, on the other hand, is also attracting people to buy products, which they do not need at that time. But, in many advertisements, companies provide discount offers to encourage people to buy their products. To exemplify, many people buy luxury cars instead of buying an ordinary vehicle by watching advertisements. Therefore, they waste lots of money on buying unnecessary products.
To conclude, rather than buying unnecessary things, people should buy new products which they actually need instead. It would be helpful for them in saving some money. At last, I would like to mention that people should be realistic while making decision to buy a new product instead of showing interest in advertisements.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, really, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43902439024 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8950028344 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540069686411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8968487859 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236986368348 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857428878702 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482210986514 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151852662511 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00909809163079 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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