You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working . In your letter
· describe the work you have been doing
· explain why you can no longer do this work
· recommend another person who is interested in the work
Dear Sir,
I am Amit Sadhana, lead tutor for TechIndia voluntership program of hyderabad region. I am writing
this letter to intimate about my career decision to vacant the position permanently.
As a part of the voluntary contribution, I handle classroom coaching to under-preveledged children. my responsibilities includes co-ordination for timetable preparation as well as making subject tutors available as per the themes of syllabus.
Current position gave me satisfaction of to be able to discharge duties of a responsible citizen through voluntership channel. While working at out NGO, I also realized that this is the ultimate interest at my heart. Hence, I would like to get the degree in the field of social sciences and advance in this field with better knowledge.
With effect of my signing out from duties, it is also imperative that the work schedule should not get hampered. Hence , I wish to nominate Mr. Amol Mays, who is a junior tutor at the same office. I think Amol is more inclined and competative. Apparently various tasks have been meticulously handled by him, in my absence. Which makes him top contender for the position. I also request you to kindly evaluate his candidature at your discretion.
Finally, please accept my sincere thanks for offering me this opportunity and shaping my life.
Looking forward to meet during exit formalities,
Yours sincerely,
Amit Sadhana
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rogram of hyderabad region. I am writing this letter to intimate about my career ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... classroom coaching to under-preveledged children. my responsibilities includes c...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...oaching to under-preveledged children. my responsibilities includes co-ordination...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... schedule should not get hampered. Hence , I wish to nominate Mr. Amol Mays, who i...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...y and shaping my life. Looking forward to meet during exit formalities, Yours sincere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, hence, if, look, may, so, well, while, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2610619469 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12728171664 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694690265487 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5556908209 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.2666666667 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123529347055 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350014634389 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406836398223 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397496867776 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435652481895 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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