Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter in response to the invitation for the interview received from your college which has been scheduled on 1st June, 10 in the morning. I am afraid, due to some prefixed issues, I will not be able to make it on that day.
I am highly interested for studying International Business from your esteemed college and accordingly I have applied for the admission last month. I am grateful that I have been selected for an initial interview as a candidate on that course. Unfortunately, I have an appointment with my dentist on the same day that has been fixed more than one month ago. As you know, getting the appointment for dental check up is now getting tough and there has always been a long waiting list for patients. Therefore, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience and I am seeking an opportunity to reschedule my date for interview in any other day or any suitable time frame.
I also like to know about the probable length of the interview and any possibility for having an evaluation test during the process.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Kumar S Sampad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... not be able to make it on that day. I am highly interested for studying Inter...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e applied for the admission last month. I am grateful that I have been selected f...
^
Line 5, column 646, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te for interview in any other day or any suitable time frame. I also like to k...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, look, so, therefore, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75879396985 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83902254106 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623115577889 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4653484461 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268108453901 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984362659255 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475802758925 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126387881368 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790973110102 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.