Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letterIntroduce yourself, explain what the problem is, suggest solutions to the problem

Essay topics:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter

Introduce yourself, explain what the problem is, suggest solutions to the problem

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Kumar Sampad and I am residing at Dawes Road of Danforth, Toronto for the last four years. I am writing to express my concern regarding the noise arising from the road construction work at the crossing of Dawes Road and Main Street since yesterday morning. I understand they are improving the damaged road, however, people in the surrounding area are facing a lot of disturbances owing to this heavy maintenance work. First of all, I am not being able to concentrate on my study in the evening for the ongoing final examination at my university. I think the same problem is being faced by the other students too residing nearby. Since the work is ongoing for 24-hours, it is affecting the sleep of the residents of that community, particularly, the kids and the senior citizens are suffering from that unbearable noise at night.

I would like to suggest that the task is being done for a stipulated time-frame from 10 am to 7 pm instead of working 24-hours. Furthermore, the addition of larger manpower may help to finish the task rapidly.

I look forward to a positive response.

Yours faithfully,

Kumar Sampad.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, look, may, regarding, i think, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82914572864 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80644156175 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623115577889 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6220882956 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114498338224 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452041007019 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037778419463 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513820622778 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366597820806 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.