You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admission tutor. In your letter
explain your position
apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day
ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for inviting me to appear for an interview at your college. Unfortunately, I won't be able to make on the date requested in an email that I received this morning i.e 19th July. I am writing this letter to reschedule it for the same day or on the next available day.
I had an appointment with my family doctor for the Ear infection and he will be going out of the country for a few days. I requested to them to change it for next day but it is the only slot they have and my visit is unavoidable. I am exhilarated to see an response from your the university as I did fillup the form last year and wasn't lucky to receive a call letter for evaluation.
Would it be possible to reorganize it for the same day? How much time does it to take to complete the whole process for screening? I have seen on the website that there is a test for entrance only for those people who haven't had 80% in English in senior secondary. How long will it run? I really apologise for the last minute changes but I can't help myself.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oing out of the country for a few days. I requested to them to change it for next...
^
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... they have and my visit is unavoidable. I am exhilarated to see an response from ...
^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...is unavoidable. I am exhilarated to see an response from your the university as I ...
^^
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... as I did fillup the form last year and wasnt lucky to receive a call letter for eval...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... for entrance only for those people who havent had 80% in English in senior secondary....
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ogise for the last minute changes but I cant help myself. I am waiting to hearing...
^^^^
Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours Faithfully Apoorva Chikara
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26046511628 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48084495105 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609302325581 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9706307259 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4615384615 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5384615385 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228068288667 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765727400339 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769996880721 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104475732835 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807106549847 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.