During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to the businessman. In you letter :
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job your are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope you are doing good. We met on the airplane bounded to Newyork on 27th of May, 2019 and boarded flight together from the Heathrow airport, London. You asked me to contact you once I will complete my graduation. So, I am writing this letter to apply as the chef for your eminent restaurant in the Newyork.
I have recently attended my convocation and awarded a degree in Hotel Management. I did the summer internship with JW Marriot, New Jersey and worked there as an assistant for the head cook. Furthermore, I was a stellar cook in the class of 50 scholars where I was certified as Star Chef by the university director. From childhood, I always wanted to be a cook at the prestigious hotel. Also, I have been working part-time as an amateur cook at the Pizzirea Bakery where they offered me remuneration for my scrumptious dishes like crossiant, garlic bread, etc. and, therefore I am competent to take charge in your hotel's kitchen.
Would it be possible to arrange a face-to-face interview this Friday? I have 2 years of professional experience to be eligible for Juinor chef position. Please review my resume, I am attaching it in mail.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Sincerely,
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'May 2019'.
Suggestion: May 2019
... airplane bounded to Newyork on 27th of May, 2019 and boarded flight together from the He...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours Sincerely, Apoorva Chikara
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79262672811 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82766118516 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6730903464 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102413632735 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037408882283 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647935901211 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819571109286 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741997121519 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.