In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
In the 21st century, we, humans have broken our own record for exceeding 7 billion mark today and lifting up this mark to 8 billions or more in the next 10 years which is predicted by a few novel scientists. It is believed by a handful of people to initiate building the new cities in the countryside that can help us to provide more homes. However, some people are against this view and want to restructure our existing cities. In my opinion, we should start renovating our cities as soon as possible to accommodate the enormous numbers of people and fulfill their elementary needs.
First of all, as the soaring need of the houses in the cities, people are thinking to move towards the outer part of the city. Moreover, the construction companies are acquiring gigantic pieces of land to start colonizing people in there but we should impede their constuction with the help of a government and can support them to vertically scale up the cities i.e start building skycrapper which can allow more people to live in a less space. for example, the government in Hongkong does allow and give subsidies to construct more numbers of multistories building and, hence they are able to feed 50 millions population in the city itself.
Secondly, if we start taking the land in the outskirts which is primarily used to sow the vegetables, fruits and cereals then we will run short of daily eatry products or will start importing them. Furthermore, it will rocket the prices of such basic amenities due to which most of the people can't afford it. The countryside vegitation aids the environment to mitigate the pollution which inturn provides less polluted air to metropoltian areas . The countries like India has seen the drastic rise in the pollution level across it's metro cities in recent times because the government sanctioned the agricultural land to construction compaines for making new houses.
In conclusion, I would recommend that if we start creating our colonies everywhere then What our next generation will eat? Despite building homes in the outskirts people commute to the cities for grocery shopping, so it's better to scale up our cities now to make it sustainable for all the individuals and by leaving the thought to build the houses there which is ameliorating the ecosystem by reducing toxins in the air.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90101522843 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71706317603 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56345177665 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9094419628 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.538461538 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3076923077 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204099957011 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070329888794 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585149453777 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121901700275 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386739356307 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.