Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to revoke the permission given to the municipal corporation to close the community center club. As there are a lot of senior citizens and kids living in our society, we need to keep it running so that they can practice yoga, games and sports within their vicinity.
I and my family have been using the gym for 3 years and all my friends are fond of swimming pool. My grandfather use to go for leisure walk in the evening and excecise with his fellow mates. In addition, the society's club is used at its peak in winter's as people come around to bask in sun and can have get together which helps to maintain healthy social life. The nearest park from the residence is almost 2 kms which will increase the commute time for most of the people and thereby more people will be affected by this change.
Would it be possible to apply an annual fees or membership for existing users? As a part of committee council, I can arrange a meeting and wherein we can make the people aware of the new regulations to avert the closure of center. It aids the individuals to maintain and foster the healthy lifestyle.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e fond of swimming pool. My grandfather use to go for leisure walk in the evening a...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...come around to bask in sun and can have get together which helps to maintain health...
^^^
Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nce is almost 2 kms which will increase the commute time for most of the people and thereby...
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Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on. Yours faithfully Apoorva Chikara
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51555555556 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38954099627 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662222222222 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2010832585 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3636363636 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992059869002 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373604492122 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377954743406 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.041777479994 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117248190673 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.