You bought a new HD television last week. At first, it seemed to work perfectly but after a few hours a line appeared across the TV and the sound seemed a little strange. You cannot take the TV back to the shop so you have decided to write to them.
Write a letter of complaint to the shop. In your letter,
give them the background information
describe the problem
ask them to resolve the issue
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the Sony TV(Model: HJAY89), bought from your downtown center on King's street. I am an exultant customer to you for 6 years but I am dissappointed by this product. I would like you to replace or fix the issues as soon as possible.
I purchased it this morning and for a few hours it worked fine. But after six uninterrupted hours of running, a line appeared on the right hand side of the screen which made the screen blurry and faded. In addition, the sound appears to contain noise and there is some lag between sound and video appearing on the screen. It is obnoxious as the LCD panel is integrated with the latest technology of the display and sound and tag with an exorbitant price.
Would it be possible for any of staff members to visit my place? My friends are coming to pick me up for shopping and I will be available after 4:00pm. However, I would recommend to you to replace my LCD panel immediately or refund my money to the credit card. I am attaching the cash receipt in the mail. Please let me know if you need more information regarding this issue.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...but I am dissappointed by this product. I would like you to replace or fix the is...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... fix the issues as soon as possible. I purchased it this morning and for a few...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49773755656 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50877128803 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6525895673 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7857142857 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165062613639 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525727466632 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347690199196 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986186030623 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163566019417 0.0580467560999 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.