It is common these days to see famous sports persons advertising sport's products.
Do the advantages of this development overweight the disadvantages?
Sport is becoming more popular these days. As enormous pupils and adults are participating in distinct categories of sports league. It is believed that the advantage of this will overpass its disadvantages. People always follow their favourite player and consider them as idol, so if they advertise products they will follow it too.
Following your specific player will help you to motivate and clear your confusion of what you want to become in young age. It will help you to grow with your dreams of becoming a renowned player. You can drive well on your studies by seeing how popular they are among youth and give you more confidence. Popularity of sport's products will proliferate the sales of equipments and it will also boost the figures of the people inclined towards the games and sports. It is profitable for person in sports industry and help in creating more jobs.
The sport person become famous it comes with a lot of hardwork and efforts. To keep their accepted personality they start taking drugs to keep them active and strong. Young generation also follow them as idols and indulges them in drug activities due to which they suffer alot in their studies. However, you can help them in stopping these habits but it will be difficult for them.
In conclusion, It is evident that advertisement will be benefical in economic and involving youth in sports. In long term, It will help countries to represent them better at international level but some sports amateurs will get into the habits of drugs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90310077519 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56216795803 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1362830415 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142818565312 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625400113804 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573605414825 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948131364718 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391312015648 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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