You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to withdraw from the course that I am taking in an evening at your Downtown center. I was elated by the content and the practical workshop you provided which makes this course for purely professionals. I would like to resume this course in the next month if permitted.
Initially, I was able to manage tasks within my scheduled working hours and had no problem in attending evening coaching classes for Artifical Intelligence. However, one of my team members had an accident this morning while he was travelling from home to attend the office.The accident was so intense that he broke his right hand arm with some bruises over his body and prescribed the complete bed rest for a month. So, I need to look after his on going projects which made me occupied for this month.
Would it be possible to rejoin the next month batch? I can able to rejoin to the same classes where I left. If this sounds good to you, please send me the time table so that I will manage to brush up the old curriculum before coming to the classes.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Sincerely
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s this course for purely professionals. I would like to resume this course in the...
^
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...avelling from home to attend the office.The accident was so intense that he broke h...
^^^
Line 5, column 446, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...r a month. So, I need to look after his on going projects which made me occupied for thi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon. Yours Sincerely Apoorva Chikara
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60194174757 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44104778716 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640776699029 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9105780249 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152327086734 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061094272858 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615232922995 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111732010019 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561595387321 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.