Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to continue my evening computer classes, which I have been attending for the last six months.
Recently, I have changed my organization, where I have been working for the last three years, for the development of my job profile. I have promoted as a team lead, and needless to say, my roles and responsibilities have also increased, thereby I have to spend extra time in office to finish my daily workload.
Unfortunately, it is impossible for me to attend evening classes because of the increased work pressure, as I have to join meetings on daily basis in the evening due to which I fail to reach for the course on time frequently.
I want to complete my course as it will be beneficial for my carrier growth. Taking everything into consideration, I request you to adjust my course timing in the morning schedule so that I can finish my course successfully.
I hope you will consider my humble request and waiting for a positive response from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Deepak
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91292678242 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583783783784 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0252858951 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158473486413 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790835246058 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435401016681 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975682468424 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359124666651 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.