Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
Say why you would like to go on the trip
Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to show my interest in the three-day trip, the school is organising to the United States of America. I am exicted to go on my first international with my daughter. I would like to ask for some information about the trip like medical facilities and medical insurance in case of an emergency.
My daughter is allergic to the glucose and the pollen as the tour will start in mid of March when they are at the peak I need to give her extra care and medicines on time. Also, I have been working as a part-time nurse at Mother Care's office in downtown which makes me a helping hand to take care of other kids. I do have the professional certificate of hospitality which I received recently. In addition, the expedition will help my daughter to learn more about different cultures. Furthermore, I could take care of her while on the trip.
Would you let me know if we need to take any international medical insurance? If yes, where I can opt-in else please give me details of companies who can issue it. Is there any eligibility criteria for joining? Let me know in case you need more details.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y first international with my daughter. I would like to ask for some information ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55909090909 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69564616826 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7575628828 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6428571429 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140028592836 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433886810975 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437953294522 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792005004437 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723441353402 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.