Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney College of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.
Write a letter to the director of the school. In your letter, explain:
who you are and why you are writing
request these documents
ask whether you need to pay any fee for that
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to request duplicates of the reports and the assignments that were the part of my course curriculum. My student number is 568279107 and enrolled in presentation skill course in April 2018 at the Sydney College of Australia. I request to you to allot me a set of copies.
Actually, I have recently joined the new employer in downtown, Sydney and they are requesting all my documents related to this course to clear my pending background check which is due only for this part of my career. I connected with registrar but they want me to drop an email to you with all the requisite information needed to issue a new set of certificates and assignments.
Would it be possible to post them directly to the employer address? I am hoping that they will be sealed by office of admission and attested by the director of course which is necessary to prove its authenticity. How much fees does it cost and where can I pay it? Please courier it with express service I can bear the cost so that it is received by this week. In case of any queries, you can connect to me.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ecessary to prove its authenticity. How much fees does it cost and where can I pay i...
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Line 9, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am waiting to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully Apoorva Chikara
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, then, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55348837209 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67219725746 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4354710378 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207690583648 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06872202102 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515493845225 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107235360965 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691046414073 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.