Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is believed that a few people uses the radio to get the news update on the day-to-day basis whilst some people enjoy watching television for the news. In my opinion, the television is a better source of reporting than the radio as you can subscribe much more channels these days. In addition, you can also rent out international news channel to know more about the world. This essay will discuss both the views and also provide an opinion.
Radio, a wonderful gift from the science and when it was invented as the only electronic device available in the markets which works without electricity efficiently. The major advantage of the radio is its mobility which aids people to take it to any location without thinking about the availability of power and keep the populace aware about the changes that has been progressing in their vicinity, and the country. for example, there are some of the Indian villages where electricity is unavailable but they use radio to listen to the news about the manifesto their government launch during elections to improve their social status.
With the advent of technology, we got a new piece of device known as "Television" helped millions of people to change the way they are listening news. In addition, it makes public to watch the real place from where the updates are coming. According to scientific experiments, it is seen that watching television ameliorate the memory because visuals have greater impact on brain rather than listening to the sound and creates more interest. Also, radio doesn't have International broadcast channels due to limitations on existing technology which restricts people to only know the information within their country but TV allows the users to subscribe to the International news operators.
In conclusion, television is more beneficial in terms of watching news as provides better coverage of the world than radio because of its limitation in the number of sources. However, radio is the best in the areas where electricity is still a concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08955223881 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87086904302 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549253731343 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0333240792 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.153846154 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270173717258 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879548154377 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648754539355 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154050194353 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734012343151 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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