work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the headset I purchased last week. I have been an exultant member of your shop for 5 years. However, the product that I bought disappointed me. I would like you to replace it as it is hampering my office work.
As you know, I prefer to work from home because I need to give maximum hours of call support in day to ensure the smooth process of logistics. On the first place, when I plugged into my laptop it created a creepy noise and stopped however after an hour it restarted due to which I was unable to listen to the clients clearly. In addition, I am communicating temporarily on emails to respond to my customer's queries but not all of them. These problems exacerbating my business relationship with some of the eminent user.
Would it be possible to send an agent from your shop for replacement? My headset model is Philips 678HG and black color. I hope an auxiliary piece should be available, if not please send me the list of the stocked headset. I am attaching the bill and checked it is under warranty for 6 months replacement. Please send me a new headset as soon as possible.
I am waiting to hearing from you soon.
Your's Faithfully,
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 495, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...cerbating my business relationship with some of the eminent user. Would it be possible t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54910714286 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66714452497 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651785714286 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4979605662 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.9333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17810627013 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547307758716 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570896226703 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866815406216 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044620928751 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.