You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was damaged.
Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In your letter:
give details about the order you made
explain what was wrong with the item
tell the company what you want them to do about it
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about an iPhone XR charger which I ordered on the 26th of May. I have been an exultant customer to your organization but this time, my experience is obnoxious. My order number is OTG398065.
First of all, the product was delivered after a week from the expected date of arrival. I was shocked when I opened the package that I received in today's morning and saw the USB cable had cut. Furthermore, When I plug in that cable It didn't work with my phone. It was an urgent parcel so I requested it through the prime membership which made me disappointed because I will be traveling out of the country tomorrow.
Would it be possible to refund my money? Because It might take a few days for posting the cable and I won't be available. I request you to refund money to the credit card by which the payment was done. I am attaching the cash memo for reference. Please let me know if you need more information, email address: chikaraApoorva@gmail.com.
I am expecting an immediate action on this email.
Your's Faithfully
Apoorva Chikara
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...rthermore, When I plug in that cable It didnt work with my phone. It was an urgent pa...
^^^^^
Line 12, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...il. Yours Faithfully Apoorva Chikara
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65128205128 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99611846199 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671794871795 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6939975988 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7857142857 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150358009792 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447570115221 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411850755809 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697633630275 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040807686872 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.