Dear Mr. Smith,
I am glad to receive your invitation to share my thoughts on the economic development of my country at a global meet at Stanford College, New Texas. I am confident that it be a great learning experience to share the stage with brilliant minds from different countries. For this event, I am available in the first week of next month, between 3rd to 4th March.
Being an economist for the last 10 years, I am planning to share my knowledge on the expanding economy of my nation, and the role of youth in the next 5 decades to make it even bigger. Apart from this, I will throw some light on some staggering facts related to the need for globalization and the role of affluent counties in collaborating with deprived nations.
As a part of my speech consists of different surveys, I want to show some facts and figures to the audience, therefore, it would be great if a projector can be arranged to present the slides. It will help people to understand the facts and establish a connection with the main idea.
I hope my ideas and thoughts would add some value to the audience, and I will look forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards
Peter Parker
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, therefore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57075471698 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64286942753 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589622641509 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.4569194202 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.666666667 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0758514421382 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276369990798 0.0766984524023 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539145638103 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447336929737 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415497829908 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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