Dear Mr. Lee,
I am writing this letter in regard to the music concert that took place last week. I believe, it was my privilege to experience such extra-ordinary talent of your band live. I booked the tickets for this show three months in advance only to listen to your songs and it was such an amazing moment when you started singing melodious songs, and made the whole atmosphere astonishing.
I am working on your footsteps and started my own local band in my college, and often participate in local concerts in malls and restaurants. Although, my band is not much famous in the city, we are very talented and composed several songs till now. We are a group of five members in the band, and being a vocalist, I take charge of my band and responsible for event planning and management.
Currently, we are working on an album where we are planning to introduce the combination of rock and classical music. I would request you to suggest some locations to shoot our video, and recommend some producers who shall help us in releasing our album.
I hope to hear to back from you soon.
Kind Regards
Peter Parker
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...xtra-ordinary talent of your band live. I booked the tickets for this show three ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...de the whole atmosphere astonishing. I am working on your footsteps and starte...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63076923077 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56873427825 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0910190614 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127564184402 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478423368442 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426185592897 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858888103641 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404613310935 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.