Movies and television shows are made for the purpose of entertaining people. The amount of hatred and crime shown on these platforms should be regulated by a government body to mitigate criminal activities in society. I certainly agree with the above notion and believe that such violent scenes in theatres and TV shows influence our behavior and activities in the real world.
It is a proven fact that people learn new ways of committing crimes from films and television shows and practice these techniques in the real world. Entertainment shows producers and movie directors show modulus Operandi to perform illegal activities, like robbery. In order to prevent such mishappenings in society, there should be censorship on showing violent scenes which motivate individuals to commit a crime. For instance, the ideas behind many bank robberies and thefts are originated from movies where directors show a unique way of stealing money and harming people.
Secondly, when such violent scenes are shown on television, it has an adverse effect on children. They start inculcating bad habits and often harm their peers at schools. Moreover, if a child watches such violent films without parental guidance, it sometimes results in delinquency. Therefore, it is imperative to regulate such scenes from movies and small-screen shows to ensure an appropriate message reaches the public. For instance, many countries, The United Kingdom, for example, have banned the use of weapons in television shows and commercials to ensure peace and safety.
To conclude, many criminal activities in society directly emerge from violence shown in movies and television shows. I believe that it is imperative to control such scenes from small screens and movies as it gives a wrong message in society and many bad elements learn new ways of committing a crime.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2866894198 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7366225461 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539249146758 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0679572384 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15289569992 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592892514678 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418987198738 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106399318683 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356714043322 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.