You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have
never visited before. You have an acquaintance who lives there.
Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter
• explain your situation
• say why you feel unsure about living in the city
• ask some questions about life in the city
Dear Sunil,
I hope you are doing good.
I am writing to ask you some questions related to your city lifestyle. Actually, I have received an employment offer letter last week from a reputed multinational company called Honeywell, which is one of the popular product based organization in Toronto, Canada. So, I am planning to live in Torornto, but, As you know, I have never been there in Toronto before and I am not sure whether the city is suitable for me or not, as I am a reserve person. Recently, I heard that it is a very crowded city. Is this true?
I also heard that Toronto has very cold weather throughout the year, and I am afraid of the cold. Can you please tell me more about weather? I am not sure how would I manage to live there for such a long time, but I am certain that you would help me in finding a right place to live in Toronto. Moreover, I have managed to get some information on some of the popular residential colonies, but still I am confused about where to live. I would be grateful to you if you could answer my questions basis on your experience.
Also, if you could guide me about the lifestyle and culture in the city, it could be very helpful for me to settle down easily. Specifically, I would like to know about public transportation, hospitality, and medical services. Finally, I would like to know about the best shop for buying warm clothes as I am afraid of cold weather.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 348, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...have managed to get some information on some of the popular residential colonies, but still...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 325, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'weathers'.
Suggestion: weathers
...ing warm clothes as I am afraid of cold weather. I am looking forward to hearing fro...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, you know, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46043165468 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63797361977 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3678273869 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275969725572 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959866852733 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757127782637 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168844942481 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555885055421 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.