Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town.
Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain why you think the decision is wrong
say what you think the council should do instead
Dear Sir,
My name is John Carberry and I live at sector - 40, Gurgaon since 2010. As, I have been residing in this sector for quite a long time, I know about each and every place of this area such as park, market and Community Centre. I am an engineer by profession and works with an information technology multinational company which is located in New Delhi, the capital of India.
Last month, I was informed by my neighbors that local authorities have taken decision to replace a public family park with a car parking area. I personally believe that the public parks are more important than car parking, because it provides us fresh oxygen and peaceful place to spend some quality time. Moreover, it gives opportunity to children and elders to meet and greet people from different cultures.
I would like to request you to reverse this decision of closing the public park, you should raise awareness about not to buy new cars instead. By doing this, number of cars in our locality will not rise and there would be less vehicles and less noise pollution.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Jay Larosa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vehicles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...cality will not rise and there would be less vehicles and less noise pollution. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78712871287 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47651494218 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70297029703 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9304185526 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239024965391 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787713527902 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482962266847 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106041970311 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508801170444 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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