Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain the problems it is causing you
• offer at least one solution
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing to let you know that I am facing many problems due to the music which you play laud music daily during the night. I am not the only victim other neighbors are also suffering from this laud music. I have no issues with music, even I too love listening to songs. But, we should not play songs in the night at high volume.
Generally, I spend my whole day working at the office, and after returning home in the late evening, I study at night. But, because of laud music which you play daily in the night, I am not able to study properly. Also, I am not able to complete my office work which I usually prefer to do in the night time. Moreover, I am not able to attend my phone calls due to high volume.
I would like to request to please stop listening to songs at a very high volume. You should use personal headphones to listen to music. Also, you could listen to songs at high volume in the day time, usually I am in the office at that time. Please treat this letter as a first warning, if I face this problem again in the future, then I will complain to the police about it.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21551724138 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14618817029 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4650518533 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8571428571 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264964737854 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09336985761 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482128619035 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141347832936 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609764136355 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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