Your next-door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
• describe the situation
• explain the problems it is causing you
• offer at least one solution
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I have been living in this society since the last few years, and I am enjoying the company of great neighbors like you. I am writing to draw your attention on a problem which I am facing due to the laud music, which you play every day at night. It is not the first time I am writing to you about this issue, I also mentioned the same problem few months back. The music, which is played by you every day at night, is very laud and distracting.
I generally go to sleep by ten o'clock at night, but sometimes I am not able to sleep properly, because of the high volume of the music, which you play at night, sometimes midnight or later. Also, sometimes, I have to do my office work at home, but again I am not able to complete my official work due to the laud music. Listening to the music is good for health, but disturbing neighbors is not good at all.
I would like to request you to please listen to the music at a lower volume, so that it would not disturb me and other neighbors. Or, it would be great if you can change your room farther away from my bedroom window. Moreover, I would like to suggest you that you can listen to music using your mobile phone headphones.
I am looking forward to maintaining a neighborly relationship with you in the upcoming future.
Your neighbor,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...ting. I generally go to sleep by ten oclock at night, but sometimes I am not able t...
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Line 10, column 37, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('neighborly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('relationship') instead of another adjective.
... I am looking forward to maintaining a neighborly relationship with you in the upcoming future. You...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1081.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34136546185 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38554892972 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1638296845 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0833333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365851481189 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153675295187 0.0766984524023 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680068590668 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200314954107 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588565592571 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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