Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town.
Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain why you think the decision is wrong
say what you think the council should do instead
Respected Sir,
Hope you are doing well. First, let me introduce myself. My name is Sharmistha Naskar, residing in southwest part over 30 years.
I am writing this letter to inform you about few arising issues with the recent decision made by local council to close the only part in our locality and build a car parking area.
Let me share few bad impacts of this decision. According to me, this change of mind in building a car parking ground by ruining the only part is not suitable and healthy solutions for children, teenagers or aged people. Following facilities will be stopped if we agree with this decision:
- Children will loose their place to play
- Teenagers won’t be able to go for small tournaments.
- Aged people will not get proper path for their morning walk and exercise.
I would like to request you and members of council to build an underground car parking section which will solve both purpose accordingly. Hope, my idea will create positive impact on your final decision.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 48, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...share few bad impacts of this decision. According to me, this change of mind in building a car ...
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Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...e with this decision: - Children will loose their place to play - Teenagers won&a...
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Line 27, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ur final decision. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01123595506 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47312714282 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713483146067 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5666432093 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0909090909 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253723684485 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764541391484 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651094465056 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900806592915 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781178004382 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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