You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
sorry it's taken me so long to write to you but at last, I put pen to paper to explain why
I haven't returned that DIY book I borrowed from you.
To be honest, I've been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up to that I damaged the book accidentally. I'm so very sorry. I know how important that book is to you as it was
passed down by your late father.
What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about DIY plumbing when I knocked over my coffee which splashed all over the book.
Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at that time.
I have sent the book to be repaired. I didn't realize that was even possible until I researched it.
Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back next week and then I'll send it to you.
Again, I'm so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sorry
sorry its taken me so long to write to you bu...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
..., I put pen to paper to explain why I havent returned that DIY book I borrowed from ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ok I borrowed from you. To be honest, Ive been feeling so guilty that I delayed w...
^^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o that I damaged the book accidentally. Im so very sorry. I know how important tha...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Passed
...portant that book is to you as it was passed down by your late father. What hap...
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... I have sent the book to be repaired. I didnt realize that was even possible until I ...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 75, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...w when I get it back next week and then Ill send it to you. Again, Im so sorry...
^^^
Line 21, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nd then Ill send it to you. Again, Im so sorry for the delay in telling you. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.96610169492 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05390349883 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621468926554 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6985321283 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236716833557 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772660747289 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05864599656 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870999955549 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057506263438 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.15 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.