You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems.
You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Explain the situation
Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction towards the service provided by the service center of your company.
My name is Jessica Ayri, a regular customer at your store in Dubai mall. On 5th May 2018, I purchased a canon camera worth AED 2000. For your reference my bill invoice number is 122.
As we are having a baby shower at our house, we thought of capturing the irreplaceable moments of our lives. However, to my notice as soon as I unwrapped the camera there was a crack on its lenses. I, immediately returned it to the merchandiser at your store. He had committed to return the camera within two working days. Unfortunately, it is more than a week now and the camera is not yet repaired.
I would expect a replacement or a cash back. Also, would request you to closely look into the matter and help us sort it out at the earliest.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jessica Ayri
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62941176471 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72492658864 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.694117647059 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8433912782 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5384615385 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206909561104 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650821357283 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462263553005 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947372526164 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471032928959 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.