You have completed the course and received a certificate but you lost it on the way back Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say In your letter you should tell how you lost the certificate why you need it what you expect the principal to do

Essay topics:

You have completed the course and received a certificate, but you lost it on the way back. Write a letter to the Principal of the college and say.

In your letter, you should tell:
• how you lost the certificate
• why you need it
• what you expect the principal to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to let you know that I have done the class and handed in a certificate, but forgot it when I return my home.

Firstly, I need to explain how I lost it. I received the certificate in the class room and thought that I put it in my bag. However, when I took a taxi to come back home, I forgot to bring my bag from the vehicle which means I left it in the taxi then I realised that I lost them.

The reason that I would like my certificate is to submit my new job. I currently applied job and the company asked me to give them my certificate as a proof of graduation. This proof is very required to have my new career.

I would like you to provide a new one. As I mentioned, it is very significant to me and I need to have an alternative one, so I request you to give me again. I am willing to pay the extra costs if necessary. Please let me know what is your decision to resolve this problem.

Your sincerely,
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Votes
Average: 5.7 (11 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04639175258 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46610027115 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7852356414 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4166666667 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1666666667 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217440532135 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744451557559 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587245695444 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126809081709 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571060163686 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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