You have decided to leave your job at the start of next month as you need to return to your hometown to take care of your grandparents.
Write a letter to your employer. In you letter:
- Explain why your grandparents need your support.
- Say what you enjoyed about working here.
- Requested a reference to help find work in your hometown.
Dear Mr. Fujishiro,
I regret to inform you that I am resigning from my post at AB bank to come back to my hometown and take care of my grandfather.
My grandpa, who lives separately with my relatives, has had a car accident last week and his left leg got broken since then. At this moment, my parents have lived abroad for two years and they cannot arrange their business to return Nha Trang city. Therefore, I am the proper solution to look after my grandfather now.
I am really struggling to decide to leave my favorite job and I worked here for more than 5 years. I forged a good relationship with the long-term customers and colleagues in our company are extremely supportive and knowledgeable. Hence, I have acquired an in-depth knowledge throughout the period here.
And I also plan to keep up my career in Nha Trang city and I hope that you could write a reference letter for me. It’s really helpful to prove my working experience here and I am able to have a good job there.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Kind regards,
Khang Do.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, look, really, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5824742268 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65351792956 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675257731959 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8642809046 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8181818182 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101863357481 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390377303236 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357600350114 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696184395793 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300986105723 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.