You have decided to set up a business for which you want to avail the facility of bank loan.
Write a letter to the bank manager requesting for information about the bank loan and in your letter, write the following:
Why you are writing the letter
What is the amount of bank loan you need
When you are able to repay the loan
Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about the bank loan for a startup business. There are a lot of opportunities in the information technology business. Thus, I am planning to launch a website design and development company next month in the city. I have several overseas clients for collaboration.
For setting up a company, I would like to apply for the worth $10,000 loan for the aforementioned business. I am planning to spend the loan amount for buying laptops, office furniture, and other basic office accessories. I will reserve some loan amount in the bank for the unplanned and unwanted expenses. Furthermore, I have prepared a business plan and I would love to share it with you.
I personally believe that I will be able to repay the loan amount in easy monthly installments. I would really appreciate if you could allow me to complete the loan for five years. I request you kindly share the interest rate and documentation for the mentioned loan amount.
I look forward to hearing from at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Vishal Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me to complete the loan for five years. I request you kindly share the interest r...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ation for the mentioned loan amount. I look forward to hearing from at the ear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, really, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95054945055 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94587726144 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.2506282921 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.3076923077 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356874946391 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106904974471 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897731619488 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170792060932 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100545969333 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.