You have eaten at a restaurant and it was such a terrible experience that you have decided to inform the manager by letter of what happened, and that you want your money back. Things to include:
- Facts. You need to be concise but explain what happened.
- Polite. No one responds to insults.
- Outline what you wish from this. What do you want to happen?
- Firmness. You want to be taken seriously.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the quality of food that I have eaten and the type of hospitality I received last evening at your restaurant. Let me explain it.
I had a birthday celebration of my wife at your renowned restaurant and we decided to order from the menu given to us. Beside, all we wanted to have a delicious dinner and what we order first was not available as informed by the waiter. Secondly, when we order the food it was conveyed the waiting time is 10 minutes, however, we received it after 30mins. Moreover, the taste of the food was terrible.
In this event when the evening was spoiled and my wife was unhappy on her birthday. Hence, I would like you to deliver proper meal within stipulated time with finger licking taste at our home address that too free of cost as a surprise to my wife. Also, I wish that you will take the feedback positively and will try to improve the quality and availability of the items mentioned in menu. There are plethora of other incidents but I think the predominant I have mentioned.
The whole scenario has been conveyed to you and I believe that it will not be repeated and you will take all the necessary steps seriously.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
urvashi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60869565217 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60055250782 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4480516686 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5384615385 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245018765102 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770438338967 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449215129039 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131234000962 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234387594796 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.