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Essay topics:

You have had a problem with your next-door neighbor. You have not been able to speak to the neighbor about this. Write a letter to this neighbor.
In your letter:
Explain the problem
Suggest a solution
Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve.

Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter regarding some issues to your attention from your naughty dog. As you may already be aware of, your dog started making small detours at night around my house, digging holes in the garden and sometimes making loud noises. Lately, I was awoken up by your dog’s bakes many times at night. Even thought, I had to consult from a doctor and had bought some sleeping pills. This would not as a big problem for me if I was not in the middle term of my exam, so it is extremely vital for me to take good rest and sleep during the right hours.
I will be grateful if you could take your dog look after by another member of your family away from this area, even my exams are over, which will be complete in about three weeks.
Otherwise, this trouble will be report to local committee to need their help in order to keep traditional good relationship between us.
Thank you for your time to read this letter and I hope to hear back from you with good news.
Yours sincerely.

Tonny

Votes
Average: 9.5 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39473684211 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15384086481 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0172809643 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.375 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264847712079 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110720342096 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726791922754 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165448589014 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752920304449 0.0580467560999 130% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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