You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment. 11:25
Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter:
– explain why you will not be able to pursue a full-time job in his/her company
– say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her
– tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.
Dear Mr Smith,
I am writing to make you aware that I would not be able to continue working as I have completed my bachelor’s degree and am seeking full-time job opportunities now.
Even though I enjoy work here, I have to leave this job as this designation does not align with my studies. Also, working as a customer representative has fewer career opportunities compared to a web developer. Due to better job prospects along with superior hourly wage, I have decided to leave my current part-time job.
I have been working here on a part-time basis for almost 4 years now and would like to address some things that I will always miss. Firstly, the friendly staff and your guidance created such a conducive environment which helped me ameliorate my personality. Secondly, I will continue to appreciate your consideration which you rendered while I was studying; I still remember during my exams you always give me a day shift instead of a night shift in order to study properly.
Presently, I am in the process of getting a work visa which would take more than 40 days. For the time being, I will continue to work here only on a part-time basis even though I am available full-time because Canadian law does not permit to do so.
Thank you for your geniality and guidance.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...have completed my bachelor’s degree and am seeking full-time job opportunities now...
^^
Line 8, column 240, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...me because Canadian law does not permit to do so. Thank you for your geniality and...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7903930131 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80368389618 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61135371179 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8761221869 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7272727273 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316861993186 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116938719402 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075218209798 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175796994054 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320588705613 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.