In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples.
In numerous western nations, the of being self-reliant and self-sufficient is highly valued. Young adults after completing their schooling, move out of their parents’ house. Society questions this trend in terms of its good and bad impact; however, this essay will argue why it is a positive advancement for both youngsters and their parents.
Firstly, living away from family makes young individuals more responsible. Whether they have decided to live alone or to share their accommodation with friends, they have to carry out most of the household chores by themselves and planning ahead of the time. In this process, they learn to be accountable, for instance, when I rented a room in Mississauga, I became more aware of my spending habit as I have to save money for paying rent. This experience of living far from my family made me better at handling financial matters. Moreover, I learnt cooking, cleaning and punctuality in the long run. Therefore, living away from family has the potential to transform youngsters to be more accountable.
From a parents’ perspective, this trend brings significant benefits as well. Once children have shifted away from their parents’ house, mother and father can spend more time together which was otherwise dedicated to the upbringing of the children. In other words, parents can rekindle the spark which might have gone missing in the past years. In addition, because they are no more looking after their children, it provides an opportunity to pursue those dreams that has remained un-fulfilled due to child rearing responsibilities. For example, these days, old age couples go on world tour due to the fact that they do not have to worry about oversee their children as a consequence of this development.
To conclude, living away from one’s family is a win-win situation for both children and parents. While parents can fulfil their dreams, youngsters transform into better version of themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22857142857 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88802708234 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615873015873 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2528247686 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227943086919 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710530406816 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518172344391 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13476469441 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299048831357 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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