Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Even though every job has a sense of purpose and can make a difference, certain vocations such as being a politician, or a scientist definitely have the most impact on the world. It has been a contentious issue whether a politician or a scientist aces this competition. This essay will gingerly analyse the influential abilities of both them and will argue why scientists overshadow political leaders markedly.
People in the favour of politicians can argue that they can spur movements that can shape the entire world in the long run. Nelson Mandela, for instance, not only ended the horrific apartheid tradition in South Africa but also incited people living abroad to fight this awful discrimination; eventually making the world a better and safe place of people of all races and colours. Also, who can forget Mahatma Gandhi’s crucial role in preaching the theory of non-violence to the globe that facilitated numerous treaties among nations to be at ease with one another. Due to such examples, some people strongly believe that politicians bring the most significant changes in the world making them the most influential figures.
On the other hand, others including myself, surmise that scientists play an indispensable role in influencing the entire globe. Apparently, a scientist can invent, discover or create an indispensable tool that can noticeably change the fate of billions of people. Taking the 19th century into consideration, if Thomas Edison did not invent Light Bulb, we would still be in darkness as our ancestors. Additionally, without Graham Bell’s ceaseless attempts, no one could have thought of communicating thousands of miles away at the touch of a button. Such inventions indeed have shaped the fate of earthlings startlingly bringing convenience to each one of us. Therefore, these contributions make them the most influential people at all times.
To conclude, even though a politician can pull its people as well as others from dire situations, scientists have been elevating everyone’s lifestyle via their noteworthy inventions. Looking at the last 100 years of scientific advances and their impact on humanity, undoubtedly these scientific prodigies are the best in terms of influencing the world.
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Suggestion:
...best in terms of influencing the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35310734463 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01418253773 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8919244406 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233847400325 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724129764906 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472309720322 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139499848836 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175109664141 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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