In the current modern world, we need rulers and inventors to run the world peacefully. Some people argue that rulers have most impact on the world. While others argue that inventors argue that inventors have most impact on the world. This essay will discuss both the opinions as explained below.
On the one hand, politicians are important people in the modern democratic process. They are the corner stone for this system. They make the laws and implement the laws. Good politicians always work for the greater benefit of the people. For example, Narendra Modi is India pm now. Under his efficient leadership India is performing very well from the last 6 years. Now, it is the 5th largest economy. Economy is flourished and all sections of the society is benefited with his schemes. He introduced the Swatch Bharath campaign to eradicate open defecation and to improve the cleanliness of the society. Under this scheme government constructed lacks toilets for the poor.
On the other hand, any society will progress with the help of the advancement in the science. Inventions always improve the quality of the people life. In old days, if we want to travel from one place to another place we walk or use animals or carts. But with the invention of motor vehicles like car or bike people are going from one place to another place very easily. Air travel further improves the transportation from one place to another place. Furthermore, finding medicine for the disease is one of the important works of the scientist around the world. For example, during black plague half of the world is wiped out because of the lack of medicine. there are so many diseases like chicken fox, leprosy and polio which harassed the people for centuries. In old days people think these are god curses on the people but scientists find the cure for the same and eradicate those diseases from the face of the earth.
To conclude, any matured society need both politicians and scientists for the common good of the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88011695906 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45077560868 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53216374269 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.571517237 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5416666667 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181273642021 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497693818336 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599328197841 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111803148249 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637286845556 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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