Some people argue that younger people should stay with parents until get settled. While others argue that they should start living on their own right after the school. i agree with the later statement. It is obvious that younger people sooner or later will have their own family and need to support them.
Firstly, younger people living or sharing space with the friends is always beneficial to both parties. Because all of them are coming from different backgrounds and sometime cultures too. In this global world, one important skill is people management and they can learn this skill at an early age. All universities as part of the curriculum they ask to submit the team project. Means this project need to be done as a team. Another important quality for any workforce is working in a team. Because in any company projects will complete by team only. A complete transformation of the boy into man can happens by staying with friends in their studies after the school. For example, my cousin is an introvert until his schooling. He always in his room when he is in the home. But to study in the college, which is far from the home, now he stayed with friends. After completing his college education, he is transformed totally, and his parents cannot believe this.
Furthermore, staying with friends will teach a very important lesson the financial education. Until the school, parents will manage the expenses. we pretty much not involved with them. But once young people step out of the home, they need to work hard to meet the expenses. My father told to me that saving is another form of earning. Once we start earning, we know how hard to earn and will spend cautiously. But they need to take smart decisions about working. We need to work for only the required money because our goal is study well. If any help is required, we can always ask the parents. For example, my brother for engineering course he joined in the remote college. He rented a room with friends for the entire engineering course. Earlier he spend without thought. now he is more matured person about the money.
To conclude, college graduates should stay with the friends or fellow students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ng on their own right after the school. i agree with the later statement. It is o...
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Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ng on their own right after the school. i agree with the later statement. It is o...
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Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for any workforce is working in a team. Because in any company projects will complete b...
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
... transformation of the boy into man can happens by staying with friends in their studie...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...hool, parents will manage the expenses. we pretty much not involved with them. But...
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Line 5, column 752, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...e entire engineering course. Earlier he spend without thought. now he is more matured...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...urse. Earlier he spend without thought. now he is more matured person about the mon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78779840849 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40168063073 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535809018568 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7316714935 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.1666666667 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5666666667 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259766127921 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616228176681 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553138364157 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151873794823 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598347733698 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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