You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to
search for full-time employment.
Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter
● explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company
● say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her
● tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her
Dear Sir,
I am writing to let you know that I am planning for a job-hunt to get a full-time employment opportunity because my thesis has been approved and I have successfully completed my post-graduate degree. Please allow me to elaborate on my situation in more detail.
As you know, my home town is in Karachi; I was living in this city in order to pursue my higher studies. Now, I have to go back to my home town because my mother is seriously ill and there is no one else who can look after her, so I will search for a job over there and take care of her as well.
I have gained a lot of acquaintance working under your kind command, you have provided a wonderful opportunity to start my career which is a plus point in my resume.
I will be completing my job this month and I will move to my home town at the start of July, so I have 23 days in total with you. I would request you kindly issue me an experience certificate for the period of two-year part-time employment.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Maryam Khan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 131, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y, so I have 23 days in total with you. I would request you kindly issue me an ex...
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Line 17, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eriod of two-year part-time employment. Looking forward to hearing from you soon...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.435 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62951991816 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.451777742 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213105839286 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906688201219 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468198173809 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108021012785 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378008600292 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.