You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party.
You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighour. In your letter
- Introduce your self
- Describe your plans for the party
- Invite your neighbour to come
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ……………,
Dear John,
Hello. This is Darby who is living opposite your house. I met you when I moved this house two months ago. Thus, I am pretty sure that you can recall me. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am going to have a party next Sunday, 24th of July from 8pm.
My birthday is 28th of July. That is why I am planning to hold a party at that time. I think it should be very noise because it would be crowed. My girlfriend, parents, friends and also my girlfriend’s friends are invited at my big party. The party will be in full swing until late night.
I am a little concerned that you will be uncomfortable or not be able to sleep well, so please come and join the party. Let’s enjoy the party together! Additionally, I would like to you tell something more. The dress code will be red.
Do not hesitate and afraid to come to the party. It will be amazing and fantastic a party that you have ever experienced. I really look forward to seeing you at the party.
Yours sincerely,
Darby.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rty next Sunday, 24th of July from 8pm. My birthday is 28th of July. That is why...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.169724770642 0.220444632235 77% => OK
Verbs: 0.192660550459 0.167888034529 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0642201834862 0.0606518309736 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0688073394495 0.0506257000042 136% => OK
Pronouns: 0.119266055046 0.118615021944 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0688073394495 0.107062808482 64% => OK
Participles: 0.0366972477064 0.041066498444 89% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.38552469734 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0366972477064 0.0385302599488 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0688073394495 0.0714148451538 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0366972477064 0.0191574576366 192% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0137614678899 0.00930345855455 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1018.0 1141.60824742 89% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.134020619 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30208333333 5.53046319177 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.234375 0.284621296913 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.130208333333 0.211203875043 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.078125 0.133321485273 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0520833333333 0.0843313296314 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38552469734 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.622163163488 97% => OK
Word variations: 57.4427384784 62.8969750728 91% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 12.9587628866 139% => OK
Sentence length: 10.6666666667 16.4300151701 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6532373592 44.7399317507 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5555555556 90.9928171075 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.6666666667 16.4300151701 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.613754768223 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 7.22680412371 55% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Readability: 23.6875 37.5504026743 63% => OK
Elegance: 0.722891566265 1.13073093955 64% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317195322217 0.331212695627 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0694801445554 0.0927372745006 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0667215415575 0.0736520305886 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.448701842054 0.662452444078 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155482190796 0.233577193048 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912496177937 0.122183219658 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065457583683 0.0765303033291 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.270012150207 0.110270004696 245% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.129580578449 0.120535355502 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194868045228 0.120397337282 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496617176484 0.113578534861 44% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.45360824742 174% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.54639175258 132% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.0824742268 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.62886597938 76% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.25773195876 97% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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