You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about the situation
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention a significant error in your recent article about festivals in Manchester.
The mistake relates to the dates of the Manchester Christmas Market, It is stated several times in the article that the market will be open until New Year's Day, when in fact it is due to finish much earlier than this, on the 22nd of December.
People who read your magazine and decide to visit the market in the last week of December are going to be sorely disappointed. Your error could spoil a Christmas outing or family trip for many tourists, and this could lead to complaints and bad publicity for the city.
I hope you will rectify this problem by publishing a correction in the next issue of your magazine and on the home page of your website. It is vital that you give accurate information to readers who follow your travel advice.
I trust you will act quickly to correct the mistake.
Yours faithfully,
Paul Jones
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78488372093 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48099182657 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3322830249 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207649592761 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939070046813 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569241997931 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10308990554 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757434648645 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.