You have just received an email from your English friend Eileen, now in Hanoi to do a course in Vietnamese.
Hi,
After saying goodbye, I felt so lonely and I still do although Hanoi is a very exciting and busy city! How are you? Are you doing well in your study?
To be honest, I've made slow progress in my Vietnamese! Could you tell me how to improve my speaking ability? Also, where can I get some books and other materials to help with my study? You know, I'll do my best so that I can communicate with Vietnamese in a few months' time.
Love,
Eileen
Write an email to reply to Eileen
tell her something about your study situation
tell her how to improve her speaking ability
suggest where she could get materials for her study
You should write at least 120 words.
Dear Eileen,
I'm so happy to hear from you! I'm a little bit under the weather since Vietnam is undergoing its intense monsoon season, and unfortunately, I got caught in a torrential rainstorm yesterday. I've passed my second-term exam recently with flying colors, especially in Maths and English, which makes me feel cheerful.
I'm really sorry to hear that you've been struggling to study Vietnamese. Be more amiable, girl! You should talk to the other mates in your course and team up to learn together. What's more, be more self-confident when you have to present in front of class. I know you have an inferiority complex about you speaking ability, but by this way the teachers can give you instructions and advice to improve your skills.
Do you remember the Central Library of Hanoi, the place we visited last year? You can go there and borrow some books about Vietnamese novels to enhance your vocabulary. Or you can go to the Apple bookstore, where you can buy a wide variety of stationery as well as many books at bargain prices to support your study.
Speak to you soon,
Hao.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63814850841 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.724867724868 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5143277806 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313452074995 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112969512711 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612099057824 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175302699078 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772839869488 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.