You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter;
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear John,
I hope you and your family are all well! It was so wonderful to spend time with all of you last week. Thank you for giving me the best holiday ever at your place in Lagos.
In all the excitement I had, I left my wallet at your house. I remember placing it on the bed in the room I was using while packing. I must have forgotten to put it back in my bag when my über ride came earlier than expected.
I’m sorry for the inconvenience caused but could you please pass it to Kofi who is Lagos this weekend before she returns to Accra on Tuesday? If not, I can create a fed ex courier label for it to be delivered back to me. I promise to make it you next time we meet.
Best wishes,
Emmanuel
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 578.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 142.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07042253521 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15188959835 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697183098592 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 182.7 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0082882603 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.2222222222 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319380854842 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112037782026 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111623350309 0.0603063233224 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202413951293 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12485180873 0.0580467560999 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.03 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.