Some people prefer online classes, while some others think it is better to be in a traditional classroom. Disscuss both sides and give your opinion.
While there are people who prefer to take part in online courses, others think that the most effective way to learn is by traditional classroom learning. In my opinion, I believe that studying online is more effective than regular classroom courses.
On the one hand, online classes are cheaper than traditional courses. Thus, by enrolling in online classes, poor people who cannot afford costly university education and its associated fees can acquire valuable skills and earn degrees. Moreover, online study is more flexible. One does not have to sacrifice family time or a job to finish a degree. Taking the class at the learners’ own convenient time has made it quite popular among working people.
On the other hand, learning in the classroom provides the opportunity for better interaction between students and teachers. Teachers, therefore, have more contact time with students which makes certain concepts more understandable by learners. Also, students are able to focus well without much distractions.
In conclusion, traditional classroom learning have some merits however, online study remains the preferable choice due to its flexibility and affordability among the poor and working professionals. Hence, I agree that online classes is better than classroom study.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...clusion, traditional classroom learning have some merits however, online study remai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55837563452 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86874345135 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644670050761 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5180062051 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24903896392 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841986893019 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794533553894 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152732814047 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850145970847 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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