You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:- thank your friend for the holiday- explain that you left your wallet in their house- give t

Essay topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions of how to send it back to you

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter regarding to show my dissatisfaction for laptop which I purchased last month in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color lenovo laptop and invoice number is axs123123.

I am writing this letter regarding to show my dissatisfaction for laptop which I purchased last month in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color lenovo laptop and invoice number is axs123123.

I am writing this letter regarding to show my dissatisfaction for laptop which I purchased last month in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color lenovo laptop and invoice number is axs123123.

I am writing this letter regarding to show my dissatisfaction for laptop which I purchased last month in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color lenovo laptop and invoice number is axs123123.

Thanks

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Myself
...h I purchased last month in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color l...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nth in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color lenovo laptop and...
^
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Myself
...h I purchased last month in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color l...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nth in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color lenovo laptop and...
^
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Myself
...h I purchased last month in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color l...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nth in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color lenovo laptop and...
^
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Myself
...h I purchased last month in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color l...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 139, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nth in your store. myself sam smith and i purchased black color lenovo laptop and...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 143.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1048951049 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90505368055 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 33.0 127.690721649 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.230769230769 0.622605031667 37% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 14.6751277678 44.8134815571 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.25 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0869807614674 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591628447823 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059207531817 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843010222142 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 1.51 7.59969072165 20% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 6.0 41.2886597938 15% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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