You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.. thank your friend for the holiday.. explain that you left your wallet in their house.. give them instructions of how to send it back to y

Dear John,

How are you doing? I hope you are in your good health even I am in top of my world. I reached at my home safely and feel some tired due to the journey. I have not word to Express my happiness as you and your family treat me. It was such great experience and it definitely refresh my mind.

However, I not found my wallet in my luggage after reach at home. Do you remember? when we were playing a game in your computer at living room at that time I put it in drawer of dressing table. It has not any confidential things but important things like ATM card, driving license, company identity card etc. Search and send it to me via courier when you have time. I enclose my company address with this letter as I spend more time at my office.

Let me invite to you to visit my place. I hope you will be here as soon as possible and give me chance to become host. I am waiting to see you my friend.

Best regards,
Manish

Votes
Average: 6.4 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and feel some tired due to the journey. I have not word to Express my happiness ...
^
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ired due to the journey. I have not word to Express my happiness as you and your ...
^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... such great experience and it definitely refresh my mind. However, I not found...
^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'refreshes'?
Suggestion: refreshes
...uch great experience and it definitely refresh my mind. However, I not found my wal...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...e after reach at home. Do you remember? when we were playing a game in your compute...
^^^^
Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e after reach at home. Do you remember? when we were playing a game in your compute...
^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Do you remember? when we were playing a game in your computer at living room ...
^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...we were playing a game in your computer at living room at that time I put it in ...
^^
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot any confidential things but important things like ATM card, driving license, c...
^^
Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...when you have time. I enclose my company address with this letter as I spend more...
^^
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... visit my place. I hope you will be here as soon as possible and give me chance t...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 756.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10869565217 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16942471445 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4703354388 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.4 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2666666667 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.06666666667 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265844066649 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10686237263 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085396718326 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199904661038 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349089864461 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 8.37731958763 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.67 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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