You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • thank your friend for the holiday • explain that you left your wallet in their house

Essay topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

• thank your friend for the holiday

• explain that you left your wallet in their house

• give them instructions on how to send it back to you

Dear Justin,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. First of all, I'd like to say thanks to you for making my vacations wonderful and also I want to let you know that I've forgotten my wallet at your place when I was there.

With regard to the vacations, It was an unforgettable trip and I enjoyed a lot, especially the scenic beauty of Dalhousie, for which it is popular among tourists across the world. Also, it was fun to revive the nostalgic memories of the college days. I really appreciate your hospitality and welcoming gesture. Once again, thank you for sparing your time for me.

As you know, I kept all my luggage in the guest room of your house and by mistake, I left my wallet in the left drawer of the cupboard while leaving for the airport. Could you check it there once? It is black and made of Italian leather. There is a company logo embossed on the front side of it and inside are some important business cards, a credit card and a bill receipt.

In order to get it back, I was thinking if you could hand it over to one of my colleagues, who is travelling there with his family tomorrow. I know this might sound a bit awkward to you to meet a stranger but I've no other reliable source to get it back soon. I'll send you his contact details as soon as I get it.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

Ell

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t awkward to you to meet a stranger but Ive no other reliable source to get it back...
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...er reliable source to get it back soon. Ill send you his contact details as soon as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, while, you know, first of all, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34099616858 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33285828985 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9854301332 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356883641788 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106647202663 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939312660887 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192730412141 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656581561822 0.0580467560999 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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