Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is a positive or negative development?
Some researchers have predicted the decline in air travel in the coming time, which I believe will have a negative influence on the worldwide connectivity and the economy of several countries. In this essay, I shall discuss the adverse effects of this notion to support my opinion with suitable examples.
Firstly, the decrease in air journeys will lead to global disconnectivity. In current time, we can reach any location on this planet earth by covering the thousands of miles in a few hours by plane. If by any reason, there will be limited air trips in the near future, then it would be merely impossible to visit tourist places around the world, attend business meetings, meet long distant relatives or friends. For instance, thousands of tourists visit Europe every year to spend holidays and limited or no option to travel overseas will affect tourists plans. Therefore, by considering the aforementioned reasons which will negatively interfere with the individuals' life and disconnect them from each other, I describe this future trend as a negative development.
Secondly, the reduction in air travel will also affect the economy of several developed nations. Certain countries generate their revenue from tourism, import and export business. As an aeroplane is the only fastest mode of transportation in the present time and in the absence of air journeys, the tourism industries and international businesses will suffer. For instance, India generates 40% of its revenue by exporting in-grown wheat. Therefore, none or minimal air movement will have adverse ramifications on national income,
To conclude, I restate that the notion of reduced air journeys will certainly have negative affect on the global relationship and the economic development of various countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39145907473 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91143224807 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3819440516 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298250409053 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954425284519 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690604503691 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167552317324 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283836999985 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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