Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In most of the countries, shopping is considered to be the best way to spend idle hours by adults. This essay will first discuss the possible reasons behind this phenomenon and later, agrees that this growing trend may have adverse implications on the future life of the young adults.
The main reason for shopping as an all-time favourite recreational activity is the independence of the modern generation. As the majority of youngsters stay away from their parents and there is nobody to spend time at home, shopping is an easy way to meet friends, buy products and relax. For instance, the recent study by Cambridge University clearly shows that 70% of the young adults spend their weekends at shopping centres and admit that in this way they feel stress-free and rejuvenated. Another possible reason for being a shopaholic is the popularity of e-commerce sites As it is quite easy to kill their idle time by exploring and ordering products online with the click of a button, shopping is becoming an emerging trend nowadays to relax in free time.
Despite these reasons to ease oneself by frequent shopping, I think that this is a negative development. Because young adults tend to spend money on unnecessary items, which they actually do not require. By developing this habit of overspending they fail to manage their financial budget in the future and as a result, pay high rates of interest on the mortgage to satisfy their basic needs. Data published in Times Now also reveals that 50% of the loan takers are adults who pay instalments to meet their rudimentary requirements but spend their salary on purchasing unwanted items. Seen in this light, this behaviour has adverse ramifications.
To conclude, unlimited liberty and convenience of technology are the possible reasons which encourage individuals to purchase goods in their leisure time. At the same time, I feel that this prevalent trend of buying worthless products by youngsters paves the way to face the burden of debts and therefore, it is certainly a negative development.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08259587021 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77411946604 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9607713786 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.538461538 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235707098836 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874216711947 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504531638271 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142431380659 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516356764798 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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